Rainy July Night Comments

I'm glad the rain don't last always. Very flowy and rhythmic. Lovely.

beautiful rhyming words to express your predicament of getting stuck outdoors during a July downpour. The darkness with chilling winds and the rains lashing at you with the roar of the thunder and the flashes of the lightning. Actually I miss all that. Thanks for reminding.

A collation of lines of July night in a perfect and astounding rhymes...though i echoe Leslie's opinion...Thanks! ! !

a beautiful write, which kept me going from line to line.

the continuation of the rhyme throughout made it read like an alliteration piece. nice

The pleasantness of monsoon rainfall in the cheeky month of July with summer at full bloom and rainfall creating ripples in sun's activity is very wonderfully crafted in this poem. The overwhelming empowerment of the rain has made you able to write such a splendid poem..... Best Wishes Naseer

Well written poem, I love it.

I read it at one go, right? It gave me so much delight and shows your poetic might! It is a nice composition. This is what we call 'antya prasa kavitvam' in our Telugu. So nice. Cograts.

lovely flow..rhytemic like rain drops

rain....rain..........poetry on every line..........

hey this is beautiful enjoyable piece indeed.. i liked the rhymes.. adds rhythm to it.. great write friend! ! ! 10+++ with love shan

Goood flow of words good write 10

Your forced rhyming has a style of it's own. GOD, walks in the clouds upon the earth.

vow! what a beautiful rain torrential.rhymes too. voted10 surya

It made my lips tight Legs like fallen kite Hands with red bite Hearts beat on quite Life seems to cee a fiss