Tormented by the grueling summer's might,
My patience, unfathomable, held tight.
A long wait finally saw its end,
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Great Ode to Monsooné arrival, brilliantly worded and keen rhymings. TOP Marks for this poem. I am very happy to see that this beautiful poem is chosen as The Member Poem by Poem Hunter And Team.
The way you have depicted the weather reminds me of my country. Reminded me of my childhood. It reminded me of the first love, in short, my tears flowed like dew drops. It is a very good poem. You will make great progress. Jaishree Ram
Congratulations on this poem being selected Poem Of The Day. This beautiful poem with excellent rhyme and rhythm deserves the recognition. Well done, dear poet.5*