Rainy Delight Poem by Tejeswar Patnaik

Rainy Delight

Rating: 4.8


Tormented by the grueling summer's might,
My patience, unfathomable, held tight.

A long wait finally saw its end,
As the season arrived making the raindrops descend.

With gleeful eyes, I watched the roaring sound,
As clusters of clouds burst forth, unbound.

Nature tested our patience, unfathomable and true,
Yet obliged every species, with planet earth anew.

Heaving a sigh of relief, we beheld the sight,

Crystal drops on leaves, a wondrous delight.

I wished to catch the falling drops, gripped with fantasy,

Gleamed to see the spectacle of rainbow's symmetry.

Sunrays wrapped in clouds, cheering the rain god's might,
A round of applause, from all, in pure delight.

I was enthralled by Rain's rhapsody,
It's beauty regaled everybody.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem with arrival of monsoon
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Congratulations on this poem being selected Poem Of The Day. This beautiful poem with excellent rhyme and rhythm deserves the recognition. Well done, dear poet.5*

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 August 2024

Great Ode to Monsooné arrival, brilliantly worded and keen rhymings. TOP Marks for this poem. I am very happy to see that this beautiful poem is chosen as The Member Poem by Poem Hunter And Team.

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Shakira Nandini 08 July 2024

The way you have depicted the weather reminds me of my country. Reminded me of my childhood. It reminded me of the first love, in short, my tears flowed like dew drops. It is a very good poem. You will make great progress. Jaishree Ram

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 August 2024

I have great respect for your precious response.

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