Sleek blurred silhouettes
beneath colored umbrellas
shun falling silver.
On the path to golden sun
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2) " On the path to golden sun strangers all walk together" what more? 5***
Marvellous.. One of the best Tania's I have read. Rain is one unique phenomenon everyone, especially poets admire. A person born and living in Kerala India, which is served by two monsoons, I am never tired of rains. Rains bring people together, rejuvenate.
Excellent Tanka Evelyn, after every shower the sun emerges. Photosynthesis in action, and poets in action! Great write.
Sleek blurred silhouettes! A wonderful poem. Top score dear poetess.
Loved the imagery, silhouettes and umbrella wonderful combination
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