Thursday, March 20, 2008

Rainy Day Car Troubles Comments

Rating: 4.5

Standing in the pouring cold rain,
lost all hope to ever get lunch
looking worse than a drowned rat
really cold and alone
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Jurietta Duraan 20 March 2008

A beautiful poem portraying this sweet memory perfectly... these moments are what makes up our lives and they are worth writing about!

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Harlan Simantel 20 March 2008

I like this slice of life, a simple act that touched your heart, remembered, and shared. It is those simple kind acts of love in life that are the best. Thanks.

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