Saturday, June 16, 2018

Rains At Islamabd Comments

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I just send a flying kiss to the naughty fairy,
She became hot, created a low pressure belt
And returned it with a beautiful weather,
During the hot summer life was at a test!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Red Soul 17 June 2018

Your poem is lovely one. I really like the idea of rains setting us free. As a young person I have often washed myself in the rain, and always felt it purified the mind and the body. Although I am not religious, I like the idea of this purification. We should all have pure thoughts and work with honesty. A beautiful poem Mr Jawad. Thanks for sharing.

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Kelly Kurt 16 June 2018

My dear friend; do you truly believe that a demon is imprisoned while you fast? I am glad that you got cooling and life giving rains. Your descriptions are poetically beautiful!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 June 2018

A magnificent poem. Each stanza of this beautiful write stands out. Rains bring graces. Brilliantly penned.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 June 2018

Let the rains continue, let the night prolong, I shall send flying kisses to nature once more......so touching. Beautiful poem. Eid Mubarak.

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Rini shibu 16 June 2018

Wonderful poem about weather and beautifully presented.. Eid Mubarak

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Rajnish Manga 16 June 2018

The poem re-creates a festive mood with so many pleasant images from earth to sky. Eid Mubarak, Sir.

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