Rains 9: Awaiting Rains Comments
Wait not at the gate
O for rains each dying date,
Fret on weak walls' fate!
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A timely warning about the devastation that could be caused to dilapidated edifices and old, weak walls by torrential rains. Thanks for sharing.10 points. My epic of life 1 and 2 are named as epic of life part-1 and part-2. Thanks.
Very sensible poem on rains as well as the problems that it may bring in its wake. Thanks, Sir.
Thank you Dear RM for reading all them three with your excellent feedback.
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8/27/2025 8:40:42 PM # 1.0.0
A beautiful and meaningful haiku is cutely delineated by you dear Pathak sir. I appreciate this poem.10
Thanks for such wonderful feedback KM.