Tuesday, August 20, 2019

Rains 8:You Alone Never Return Comments

Rating: 5.0

Look, the rain returns,
Earth green again turns,
It's you that never returns.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2019

A brilliant haiku on rain and love is fantastically executed. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2019

Thanks, you liked this one too.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 August 2019

Rains return every year in rainy season to cool the parched earth and turn it in greenery. The other part of the haiku is intriguing. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2019

Thanks dear RM, the 1 to 6 on rains were received well and so I added six more.

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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2019

A lovers longing for his muse felt during rains expressed beautifully. Thanks a lot.

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Aniruddha Pathak 20 August 2019

Thanks again for liking this one

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