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If I shed my tears in rain,
She'd still read my pain.
For, she is to me so close—
Close to my life's strife,
So sure am I she this knows.
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Senryu |07.08.2019|

Aniruddha Pathak

Friday, August 2, 2019

Topic(s) of this poem: love,pain,rain

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With apologies to the Japanese originators, this Senryu takes some freedom as to its structure.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2019

If I shed my tears in rain, She'd still read my pain— She, close to my life, my strife! .....touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 August 2019

Thanks for the appreciation dear reader.

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