Rains 2 (Haiku) Comments

You have so much skill with this form. I am not usually that into haiku but yours are among the best ever.

beautifullll. I love to be washed in the pouring rain

Where life continues to grow, under the glow of the lords smile....beautiful work Sandra 10++

beautiful beautiful haiku ma'm.....loved it...10

'watering the earth' would have made the imagery look more mystic...heaven/earth...but these are only after write suggestions...the original creative thinking to be admired...thanks...10

And I can feel it all gushing down from the heavens. It is what so many people pray for. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

words pour down........... o haiku.............

very cool..i can feel the rain pouring hard.. nice picture your words show... and the the help gives to the land.. thanks for sharing... regards lovelots, maia

nice, beautiful, cool one indeed! ! ! great refreshment....

well in time and well written haiku...crowned by a dedication wonderful cheers

Elegant and eloquent. What more could the doctor order? Great Haiku. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Rains #2 is a flawlessly written senryu which is absolutely beautifully conceived and expressed, Sandra. You have a great talent for these Japanese poetic forms. Carl.

yeah, saw it on the tv...life is full of nimiety! thnq for the haiku...

beautifully written haiku......10

a well scripted haiku.... short n sweet..