The heavens relent
Clouds burst with torrential rain
Watering the earth
(for Indira Babbellapati)
very cool..i can feel the rain pouring hard.. nice picture your words show... and the the help gives to the land.. thanks for sharing... regards lovelots, maia
nice, beautiful, cool one indeed! ! ! great refreshment....
well in time and well written haiku...crowned by a dedication wonderful cheers
You have so much skill with this form. I am not usually that into haiku but yours are among the best ever.
Where life continues to grow, under the glow of the lords smile....beautiful work Sandra 10++
'watering the earth' would have made the imagery look more mystic...heaven/earth...but these are only after write suggestions...the original creative thinking to be admired...thanks...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
And I can feel it all gushing down from the heavens. It is what so many people pray for. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson