Rains 2 (Haiku) Poem by Sandra Martyres

Rains 2 (Haiku)

Rating: 5.0


The heavens relent
Clouds burst with torrential rain
Watering the earth

(for Indira Babbellapati)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

And I can feel it all gushing down from the heavens. It is what so many people pray for. Well done! 10 Karin Anderson

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premji premji 12 July 2009

words pour down........... o haiku.............

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Miriam Maia Padua 12 July 2009

very cool..i can feel the rain pouring hard.. nice picture your words show... and the the help gives to the land.. thanks for sharing... regards lovelots, maia

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Shashendra Amalshan 12 July 2009

nice, beautiful, cool one indeed! ! ! great refreshment....

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Saadat Tahir 11 July 2009

well in time and well written haiku...crowned by a dedication wonderful cheers

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Patti Masterman 19 November 2009

You have so much skill with this form. I am not usually that into haiku but yours are among the best ever.

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Meggie Gultiano 16 July 2009

beautifullll. I love to be washed in the pouring rain

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~ Jon London ~ 14 July 2009

Where life continues to grow, under the glow of the lords smile....beautiful work Sandra 10++

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Vaibhav Pandey 14 July 2009

beautiful beautiful haiku ma'm.....loved it...10

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Kesav Easwaran 13 July 2009

'watering the earth' would have made the imagery look more mystic...heaven/earth...but these are only after write suggestions...the original creative thinking to be admired...thanks...10

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