The rain..
Sheets of grey froth
battering the unholy
city,
...
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reading the poem, I am thinking about my surroundings, exactly what you write, Nice job.
A well written and expressive poem! 10! Yesterday we had the first heavy rain of the season in Delhi! Flooding roads and drenching souls! -Raj Nandy
wow really nice -10 anjai (read mine My raindrops though not so good as yours)
you have really captured through your images the other side of rain. rain can be cruel.10 Mamta
I love the illustrative -ness of this poem. Your sequence of thought is also intriguing and fascinating. I can actually feel the rainy season of some city. well done