Monday, July 20, 2009

Rains! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rain..
Sheets of grey froth
battering the unholy
city,
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Soumyendu Biswas
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Forest T. Jones 10 August 2009

I love the illustrative -ness of this poem. Your sequence of thought is also intriguing and fascinating. I can actually feel the rainy season of some city. well done

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Chitra - 31 July 2009

so very realistic, sensitivity and practicality together

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 29 July 2009

reading the poem, I am thinking about my surroundings, exactly what you write, Nice job.

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Raj Nandy 27 July 2009

A well written and expressive poem! 10! Yesterday we had the first heavy rain of the season in Delhi! Flooding roads and drenching souls! -Raj Nandy

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Existential Despair 27 July 2009

Exceeds expectations

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Anjali Sinha 20 July 2009

wow really nice -10 anjai (read mine My raindrops though not so good as yours)

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Marcella D 20 July 2009

nice I like how you describe the rain

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Mamta Agarwal 20 July 2009

you have really captured through your images the other side of rain. rain can be cruel.10 Mamta

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