Friday, August 2, 2019

Rains 1: A False Step Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lo, time to rain's here,
Love lingers in air,
Roads, mood's slippery; take care.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 August 2019

Such a sweet poem yet a deep one to ponder. Rain is nice, but a slip can make you fall both physically and emotionally. A fine poem on Rain.

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 August 2019

Thanks Dr GRM

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Dr Dillip K Swain 03 August 2019

Wow! A brilliant Haiku sir.............appreciated the concept and the poem as well..........................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 August 2019

Many thanks for liking the Haiku, appreciation and rating.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2019

Time to rain is here And love is in air. It's all slippery, take care......touching expression with wonderful imagination. Lofty theme. Marvelous poem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 02 August 2019

Word-puns are used in poems, we know, but when the sense derived makes a pun it is more interesting, thanks you so much dear poet reader KM.

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