Friday, May 31, 2013

Rainmaker Comments

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Let the rain fall
open your windows to receive it from afar
open your hearts to it
oh make yourself pure,
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Michelangelo Onicha
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Kim Barney 01 June 2015

Nice poem, Michelangelo. Would be even better with a few small changes: Let the rain fall open your windows to receive it from afar open your hearts to it oh make yourself be pure, wash it off, wash it off oh let it fall thunders spark, lightning flashes oh rain of justice come and fall deceive not yourselves for it will fall, there is nothing you can do, come inside it and be strong, ancestors may rise it would bring no harm it brings joy with it, you should be happy, smiling and jumping for the rainmaker is come.

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Godfrey Morris 23 May 2015

Rain of blessings. Thanks for this write.

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Ramesh Rai 20 July 2013

it brings joy with it, you would be happy, smiling and jumping for the rainmaker is come.

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Onyeme John 06 July 2013

Nice poem, Onyeka. Rainfall is a blessing upon the earth, so people should welcome her anytime anyday.

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Michelangelo Onicha

Michelangelo Onicha

Lagos, Nigeria
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