On the Eastern sky
As the evening befalls
In the dusk and the star light
Muted lightening surprises us all
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I really enjoyed how you made the clouds come alive, such great meter here.
No sound of thunder No smell of rain - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Have the clouds been so lonely That they have cried out all tears No one heeds to their outbursts Lightening help them face all fears.- - -Tears are always like rains.Eyes become like rain-less clouds if they cry too much.- - -Lovely poem.