Raining Hb Syllable Count 2-3-5-7-10 Comments

Another concise and powerful poem....without a lot of words, the message is understood. IMO, that is a successful poem.

just brilliant and beautiful

The new experiment of 2-3-5-7-10 syllable count is excellent. I thought it was natural and did not note till you pointed it out to me. Keep going. I tried a new 2Q (two question) structure in some of my poems. Thank you.

Rains causing puddles also sliding down her cheeks.....So Beautiful write..Loved reading it....Beautiful write.

Rain causing puddles also drops down her cheeks. Or the other way. Nicely described in the poem. Thank you.

Rain drops sliding own her cheeks Drop not in puddles But to made her blush As a token of dreams. Nice poem