Tuesday, February 28, 2006

Raining Blood Comments

Rating: 4.0

Don’t you wish the rain to wash away all fears
To blend with and dismiss all the tears

You wish the rain to calm all rage
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Kee Thampi 14 March 2006

When the rain is blood It comes over you like a sudden flood Fears come out to taught you Tears come and attack too Dear Jessie, This is a poem with some meaningful message.My best wishes. At this age you write good poems. Try your best. kee

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