Tuesday, March 11, 2014

Raining Comments

Rating: 3.5

It's raining outside
and flooding my smoky
and burdened mind.
It's raining,
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Neela Nath Das
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Valsa George 14 March 2014

It rains within and without....! The heavy clouds shed their grief in the form of rain drops and the mind unburdens through tears and sighs! A mind with the aroma of heaven is more beautiful than any other beautiful object.... but hardly anyone sees its beauty.... that is why the mind is in pain.... great write! ! Be consoled.... time will reveal the beauty! !

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Neela Nath Das 13 March 2014

Thanks for the inspiring comment.

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Chuy Amante 13 March 2014

Loves warm breath escapes my being, accept it, and know, life is worth seeing! I only offer that which I am, Be the love, feel the love, see the love, madame

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Sekharan Pookkat 12 March 2014

let the rain drops fall into your mind And cool the sunny state into loveable blues.

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