Thursday, September 10, 2015

Rainfall Comments

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Beautiful it is, the rainfall,
The world dances like a ball,
When it falls, flowers bloom,
It washes the spots of gloom,
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Arfa Kalera
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Nosheen Irfan 06 March 2016

What a beautiful poem. You have captured the beauty of rainfall very well. A heart-warming read.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 February 2016

My heart flaps with the joys, When we all girls and boys, See the rainbow in colors seven, Swinging angels in the heaven a beautiful poem that concludes the wonderful above mentioned lines. Well wrote Arfa.

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 December 2015

My heart flaps with the joys, When we all girls and boys, See the rainbow in colors seven, Swinging angels in the heaven very nice expressions of joy and beauty when the rainfalls. thank you very much for this poem

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Loke Kok Yee 02 October 2015

Short and lively and a pleasure to read.

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 September 2015

Nice with the muse of life! Where nature blesses us with rain.

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Arfa Iman Kalera 18 September 2015

thanks for your kind comment, Edward, and may you stay blessed

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Arfa Iman Kalera 18 September 2015

thanks for your kind comment Edward, May you stay blessed

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 10 September 2015

Beautiful poem.Thank you for sharing Mario, L, R Odekerken

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Arfa Kalera

Arfa Kalera

Sargodha, Pakistan
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