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Thursday, August 20, 2009

Raindrops Underwater Comments

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If I lie here
beneath the water,
very still,
hardly breathing;
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Rajkumar Mukherjee 21 October 2009

Dear Berry, its a lovely poem with beautiful and poignant imageries with a deep and clear vision. Only one suggestion, you might remove that 'by' in L 16. A PERFECT TEN YOU DESERVE. RAJKUMAR

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