Sunday, December 6, 2009

Raindrops Of Death Comments

Rating: 3.5

Tip toe dancing within a wilderness sonnet
searching for though lover, my demon knight
tasting his blood upon a fallen sword
hunted prey, evil dark award
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Cami Walters
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Rafaella Gunz 06 December 2009

I love this. Very descriptive, metaphorical, and meaningful. Keep up the good work!

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Shelby Jasmin Estrada 06 December 2009

This is a very beautiful poem.: D About heartbreak, no? The love is like a battlefeild... xP The way you tell the story is so lovely. You truly have a wonderful gift, my dear. (: My favorite lines are 'whispering winds call for thee waiting for you, dying to be free' It's so true. Keep writing. (: -Shelby Jasmin.

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