Thursday, July 3, 2014

Raindrops... Comments

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Tears are raindrops,
Falling on deserts.
Replying to the call of the thirst.
But when they fall,
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Shama Bukhari
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 September 2017

A refined poetic imagination, Shama. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 July 2014

Yes the fire of hurt is extinguished by the tears, but tears also lit fire. A nice poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 04 July 2014

Yes the fire of hurt is extinguished by the tears, but tears also lit fire. A nice poem.

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