I stand by this palm reminiscing,
as the rain drenches my body,
and my mind floods with memories.
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very good emotions, i like the feelings that are in here. i have a picture in my head of whats going on here. good write Javier... :)
i'm having a commenthalon (i'm just gonna bombard you with comments) so yeah.. ok, i love this one. its so cute and adorable and i love the story that u tell. you are so good! it really is like a movie playin gin my head. awesome work javi.