Monday, June 2, 2008

Raindrops Comments

Rating: 5.0

Listening to the rain drops
while my head rests so peacfully
upon your chest
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Bonnie Collins
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A very intimate peep into your bedroom. It's life isn't it. We can't expect our partners to experience everything we experience. You share so wonderfully your feelings and love. Beautiful Bonnie.

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this is real.. so very real...

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Robert Sheridan 15 September 2008

Bonnie, Top drawer all the way... your poetic talent is one to behold! Robert

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Ivan Donn Carswell 02 June 2008

The ying & yang of watching rain! Not everybody appreciates random beauty. Window, I hope, rather than widow in the penultimate line, but the meanings clear. Rgds, Ivan

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Bonnie Collins

Bonnie Collins

Middletown New York
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