Saturday, July 14, 2012

Rainbows Painting This Very Day Comments

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I dance with you with clouds to twinkle thru,
We surrender to the rainbows painting this very day
Waltzing o'er tree tops green against the bluest blue, `
Darting here darting there not a moment for to stay.
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Raihana Abdul Jabbar 21 July 2012

I could actually breathe the spring air..and feel the sunshine...I loved it! .. :)

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Sajna Kailas 19 July 2012

Nice Rhythem and Rhyme scheme. this beautiful poem made me thinking how marvellous God created the nature and its wonder for us! How great his love for Human! the words you crafted are really amazing. very very wonderful poem. I loved it a lot! God Bless You!

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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