Saturday, June 23, 2018

Rainbows Of Peace Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could have ignored you ignoring me
if you would have come like the broken casual clouds
that give a mild shower to the heated soil,
add humidity to the temperature,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Mahtab Bangalee 24 June 2018

excellent lines- I could have ignored you ignoring me - - - I cannot ignore you ignoring me, rise once again like the dancing virgin in the skies. nice 10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 June 2018

A magnificent piece. Every line draws a beautiful thought. It captures the very essence of water, a basic necessity of life. Beautifully crafted write with compelling imagery.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 June 2018

Adam needs rainbows not only at the skies but millions of tiny rainbows diverged through the droplets on each every part of the earth.....so touching and nice. Beautiful poem shared.

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Robert Murray Smith 23 June 2018

Every poem is now a masterpiece.++10

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 June 2018

A lovely poem giving message of peace.

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Rini shibu 23 June 2018

Came as a dense black clouds and which could change weather of life..Beautiful poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 June 2018

Akhtar, such a well crafted wonderful poem👍👍👍

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