Tuesday, June 28, 2005

Rainbows At 4am Comments

Rating: 3.9

there are rainbows at 4am, created by
an electric outlet and water
from the bathtub someone left
unattended or purposely misused-
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Amberlee Carter
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 28 June 2005

Strong poem, very touching.

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Uriah Hamilton 28 June 2005

Another powerful touching poem!

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Andrew Konisberg 28 June 2005

I liked the last 2 lines particularly, Amberlee. fresh language throughout. nice work.

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