Friday, March 26, 2010

Rainbows Comments

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It pours when it rains
These clouds of despair
Laughing at my pain
Like i should care
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Destry Miller
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Daniel Mason 30 March 2010

only a rainbow can shine true colors and bring bright smiles and only u could make something as beautiful as this

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Josephine Dunn 28 March 2010

Remember the rainbows when life seems at its darkest, when the black dog creeps behind you padding in your silent footsteps, when tears fall with no one to see them. You will be a great poet if you continue as you seem to be doing. Remember that there are others, like you, who think as you do, feel as you do, seek love as you do. Give you love to the world & the world will love you. God bless: D

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Archana Jose 26 March 2010

i like your poem.small and sweet.i am no expert but i think its good.

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