Saturday, November 4, 2006

Rainbows Comments

Rating: 4.8

Rainbows transform
Angry sky to revelation;
Highway to hope-lined avenue;
Ordinary day to the dawn of time.
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Helen Wilson
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Not a member No 4 04 February 2007

A finely crafted poem from start to finish. Logical progression and a flow that matches it. A great range of shades of emotion expressed by means of various takes on that very powerful symbol in its different guises! Quality writing of the first order. jim

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Jim Foulk 01 January 2007

a very beautiful written poem helen, i could almost see those rainbows that you wrote about. rainbows are colorful and so is this poem, thanks for sharing this with us.

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Sandra Fowler 08 November 2006

Absolutely lovely.There is so much hope expressed here. Very inspiring indeed. Take care, Helen. Warm regards, Sandra

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