Saturday, May 7, 2011

Rainbow Window Dreams Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don’t weave beautiful dreams in dreams,
Life is wide awake to desecrate your dreams,
Awaits for you in every path and alley that you cross,
And attacks with words and hideous desires.
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 07 May 2011

Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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Hither Kusum 07 May 2011

Juan thats a huge encouragement....! Thanks!

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Juan Olivarez 07 May 2011

For such a young lady you are a very well versed poetess, excellent work.

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