Monday, September 29, 2014

Rainbow Of Kisses Comments

Rating: 5.0

The color of my first kiss,
Was violet and like ultra violet rays,
It entered in her soul,
And beauty of her soul,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Pintu Mahakul 04 October 2014

Rainbow of kisses lengthen the feelings in colourful way. Nicely expressed personal feelings.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 October 2014

kISSES- why upto six it should be seven to be at par with rainbow or the days of the week yet lovely poems thanks

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Valsa George 30 September 2014

With kisses galore, you seem to have suffocated her each day! I can still sing, I can still dance, I see youthfulness bubbling in you and you waltzing in eternal romance with your beloved! Enjoyed!

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Salini Nair 30 September 2014

awesome write.....................loved its colors

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Khalida Bano Ali 29 September 2014

A nice poem I really liked it.

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