Rainbow Magik On Wall - Haiku Comments
Sunrise drum windows
dancing thru crystal chimes
few million rainbows
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Sometimes through prisms of a glass windows, sometimes through bubbles of the surfing soap, someone in a dress of seven colors, semi transparent, she descends from skies, snd dances like Manika before my sight, I try to become Vishwamitra for her, but whenever I tried to capture her, she starts playing hide and seek, disappears, re-appears, untill my wife knocks at the doors, You are taking too much time in a bath, now please come out and spare it for me. And when I reply, you mean Manika? She exclaims, Who is Manika! Your lovely poem inspired to write these lines as my comment.
Thank you Akhtarji, happy my short haiku has elicited such a sweet poem and the ethereal Manika.. thank you for your kind comment.
so i finally looked for magik in Google and found: - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ma·gick noun noun: magick chiefly archaic spelling of magic. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - so maybe that was on your mind? bri :) p.s. i now see your response below. i don't know if such responses come to me as a message; i hadn't read it until now. :)
i counted a 1,000,001. is there magic in spelling it magik? ? hee-hee. bri ;) :)
Yes absolutely. A teeny lil tweak to the regular and ordinary creates magik! ! Let the counting go..enjoy the magik! ! Thank you Bri.
Practise with the haiku form, Seema. It will exercise your powers of imagery and economy of expression. Best wishes Charl
Thank you Sir, will continue working on haiku and improve my understanding and grasp on this unique form of expression. Looking forward to more visits and comments from you for my other poems.
Sunrise drums Sunrise on windows 5 drumming - and the crystal chimes 7 a million rainbows 5 Hope my comments are helpful. Love the images you subtlely use.
Thank you sir, happy you are enjoying the imagery created. Absolutely comments from accomplished senior like you will go a long way in helping me improve and present better. looking forward to more of your visits and reviews. thanks.
That is beautiful! A rainbow is has just visited me.
Thank you Sir, glad rainbows are visiting you too after reading my simple lines.. thanks
a wonder haiku now I watch the sunlight shining through the window thanks-10
Thank you Loke Kok, time permiting I request your attention to my latest I penned against a heinous social crime Human and Child trafficking yday, titled All Trussed Up - Packaged for Delivery (Against Human Trafficking) . thanks.
Good Haiku. Delightful narrated. thank you so much, Dearest poet Seema Jayaraman. Be happy always.
Thank you Mary, am very new to Haiku, still learning the ropes.. Inviting you to read my longer poems especially Why Blame Me A Blood Moon. thanks
Rainbows emerging through crystals by refraction of young sun rays in the morning have been caught on the receptacle of your mind and reemerged as the muse. Marvelous journey. Ten points.
Thank you Ratnakarji, Nothing like the red sunrise breaking in through the crystal chimes and splintering into shimmering rainbows on the wall.. lifts the spirits up.. I invite you to check my other poems especially the latest one Why Blame Me A Blood Moon. Thanks for your vote.
Thanks Purni, you know how we jump at the chance to grab a fleeting moment of happiness.. even if its dancing images of spherical rainbows on the wall.. awaiting your poetry plz plz upload yours.
Amazing imagery is drawn here. Really wonderful sunrise drums the window. Interesting sharing....10
Thank you Kumarmaniji, my imagination is going at overdrive these days..
Thanks Kumarmaniji, these days my imagination is in overdrive.. luv my dancing spherical rainbows on the wall in the morning.
Thank you Kumarmaniji, I invite you to read my poem Why Blame Me, A Blood Moon.. thanks
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7/26/2025 8:07:34 PM # 1.0.0
Wow..That's the wonderful Haiku with few million rainbows. I just wonder. Loved it.