Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Rainbow In Motion Haiku Comments

Rating: 4.8

Red, orange, yellow

green, blue, indigo- violet
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Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black
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Richard Wlodarski 25 April 2022

I love rainbows. And I love this magnificent tribute to one of the great wonders of Mother Nature.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 25 December 2020

A wonderful poem dear Poetess Lorraine. Never imagined that the colours of rainbow could be so mystical, beautiful and enigmatic - a soulful journey of nature - truly spiritual.

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Unnikrishnan E S 25 December 2020

Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading

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traxey steewans 25 April 2020

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Chinedu Dike 02 March 2020

An insightful work of art with powerful images of beauty. Thanks for sharing, Lorraine.

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Denis Mair 13 January 2020

Your reflections strike a chord in me. Light passing through droplets casts a spectrum, then that spectrum is caught in someone's nerve net, where it is refracted into many associations./// Caught in my nerve net/ a rainbow inspires thoughts/ of many colors.

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Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 July 2019

Lively prism light enchanting rainbow delights brightly dance then hides. OHhhhhhhhhh this is a beautiful poem. This should be made Poem of the day.. thank u dear poetess. you are very very poetic in your core. tony

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Bipasha D 02 April 2018

Absolutely fascinating. This goes into my poemlist

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Savita Tyagi 31 December 2017

I am lost in rainbow of words but heart is delight.

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Savita Tyagi 31 December 2017

Wow! That’s an awesome write.

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Vernon Eaker 16 October 2017

I adore your, skills of writing, I will read more. This morning is not the time, I will track your use of rhyme, Trust me you shall know, when I write a comment below.

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Rebecca Navarre 26 March 2017

Wow! ! ! ! ! What An Enchanting, Beautifully, Colored Painting! ! ! ! ! With Such A Wondrous Flow! ! ! ! ! Truly Amazing! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Elena Sandu 31 August 2016

Wow, what a great read! Brilliant imagery, rich penning, thank you for share.

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Neela Nath Das 24 August 2014

Each and every word has given color to your imagination.The seven colors Rainbow shows give birth to new hope.Lovely write!

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* Sunprincess * 28 June 2014

...............loved reading every stanza.....and next time I see a rainbow I will definitely make a wish...

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Rachel Branscombe 15 January 2013

It's beautiful. I can imagine the rainbow with all it's colours

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Jinny Kim 15 January 2013

I love how all of the little sections are haikus... And as hard as it is to write a beautiful haiku, you've wrote so many on the same topic.

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Djinnga Fairbairn 15 September 2009

this is so beautifully written..I could see each colour of the rainbow...embracing my heart...whispers of the endless sky...reassuring....I am here....I exist....if only you can reach out...patiently awaiting....

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Diana Teo 07 September 2009

this one is really good i like it please do the same to mine =] thanx -diana teo

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Christina Iuso 19 August 2009

this poem is beautiful the first verse i was hooked great job lorraine

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