Rainbow Expressions Comments

wow that was good. I really liked that. I wish I could write like that.

From: Judy Meibach To: Nooruddeen MM Date-Time: 6/2/2010 3: 02: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Rainbow Expressions ---------- This was a well written piece that had a great imagery to it - I could visualize the image that you were trying to convey and felt that it exuded a lot of emotion as well.

Ohhh, wow. really good(: i love the rain

Colorful like rainbow…appearance is brilliant…nice imagery Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

hey this is a beautiful write indeed sir! ! ! well i wish some one will answer to some of my prayers.. this is a refreshing, nice sort of a sweet write indeed! ! ! ., ... thanks for this one.. 10 with love shan

From: Johanna Butler (invercargill New Zealand; Female; 12) To: Nooruddeen MM Date Time: 6/25/2009 12: 17: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Re: Hi hi it is awsome i would read it any time the for telling me about it can i show people at school i am in 7 and i am 12

And she realizes unto Her pretty rainbow is no more there and It faded away with the rain..... brief appearence as love..... fading away with rain... what an imagination from wonderful mind... good thought

Appear and disappear a rainbow from your spectrum of colourful words....nice

very nice poem...forks out into myriad possibilities....full of imaginative paths well written cheers

A colourfull love poem, very nice.

..loved to chase the rainbow with the lovely girl with lovely eyes...nicely written..Brishti Mazumdar

a wonderful imagery write....nice to read.....10

that was an excellent peom...10

Really wonderful expressions from an outstanding poet :)

Beautifully expressed with the little girl longing to see a rainbow. However, she learned a rainbow can be elusive and all dreams don't come true. It reminds me of when a child bursts a balloon and they become momentarily unhappy. 10 Karin Anderson

Tanx for the comment. I read thru yours n its truly amazing, very catchy and meaningful. I did also compare and your rite it is very different frm the two poems. keep up the good work aswell. Jessica :)

Good Write mister.........

Beauty and sadness well blended with everlasting imagery. Regards Naseer

I stepped into the shoes of this lovely girl and waited with her in anticipation. Your gift for luxurious imagery is intoxicating and addictive. Peace.

Dear Nooruddeen, Thank you for sharing this beautiful heart pouring with enthralling imagery of the sun, shade and the rainbow. Life is also sevenfold like the rainbow ever unfolding its new hue but uniquely merged in the truthful whiteness of love for Nature. CP