Rainbow - Dancing With The Wind Comments

Beautiful.

It is very beautiful poem to remember always with greatness in its structure

'Your words like the touch, your touch like the dew' Rachel Ann Butler

These poems are really making it into a top list somewhere?

Good flow of words I felt as if my tongue was dancing good write 10 points

Good writing. The rhyme is consistant and brilliant.

Rhythmic passionate lines that go 'At night at the sea.. / when there you will be.. / in the wind you and who, / you will dance with the wind / when the start never end / with the waves both flow, / dropp me back to the rain / keep with you the Love's chain / then back me to the bow...'

love the rhythm of this poem xx

Your mind is full of inspiration! ! I think you should have been born at Romeo and Juliets' decade. 10/10

A very good read, liked it.

What an interesting expression of feelings, I like the way you correlate the subjects of this piece.

The Dreamer (6/24/2009 11: 40: 00 AM) broken hearts i treat. I like these words always better to treat than create - Thank you

~ Jon London ~ (7/26/2009 9: 49: 00 AM) Words that echoes the pattern of life back into the heart...nicely done Tamara

Saadat Tahir (7/16/2009 1: 39: 00 PM) Where shepherds once were hous'd in homely sheds, Now tow'rs within the clouds advance their heads. writing credit...where due! The Aeneid, by Virgil

Afzal Shauq (7/12/2009 4: 14: 00 AM) I again and again say that tamara dear is a good poetess with realistic approach and her pasion is to promote quality and sense of competetion...appreciate her.10/1

LAGO LAGO (7/6/2009 9: 38: 00 PM) let it beat at rhythm and the rhythm keep on raising............

Rakesh Bedi (7/2/2009 12: 58: 00 AM) ..... broken hearts I treat; nice! Both the activities belong to love n only love!

Kristina B; Williams (7/1/2009 1: 13: 00 PM) NOT A TERM YOU WANT TO HEAR AS A POET, ACTUALLY I DO, BUT IM WEIRD, LOL, BIT THOSE 3 LINES WERE LIKE 60 LINES, SO SHORT WITH SO MUCH MEANING..AWESOME..NYWAYS GAY YOU N IT A 10..HAVE YOU READ ANY OF MY NEWEST 1S...THERE ARE 4...HURTS LIKE HELL, IS THE LAST OF EM, AND 3 B4 THAT 1..PLEASE READN VOTE, AND RESPOND TO EM

Shashendra Amalshan (6/28/2009 5: 49: 00 AM) hello ma'am.. your words are great nourishment for the, sore, wounded, shattered hearts indeed.. thanks for providing us with such pieces..10++ with lots of love shan

Afzal Shauq (6/25/2009 12: 28: 00 AM) Keep on raising rate of beats then the raising keep slow, broken hearts i treat. what a sweet haiko written in japanese way... very inspiring and heart felt..I think this is one of your best poems and I am inspired of its idea and the way you done perfectly..I suggest for you to continue the same way..and your work and ideas will be unbeatable..and readers will like..as I liked it very much..well done friend for sweet poem..10+++++++++++++++++