Friday, April 14, 2017

Rainbow Above The Tree! Comments

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While I was walking, nigh the deep pond
I heard and can feel the sound and touch of the watery song.
I can see the droplets scattered all over me and near me, in my sight and vast around
The dripping water produces an extravagant hopeful sound!
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Vaibhav Simha
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Valsa George 08 May 2020

Usually after a slight drizzle or when water jets rise and break into tiny droplets, if there is sunshine, each droplet will act as a prism reflecting the seven colours of a rainbow. It is a lovely sight watching the rainbow arching in the sky and seen through the cracks of foliage of a tree. You have beautifully described such an eye catching scene and effected a visual treat for the readers!

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Jaya Das 14 April 2017

Wow this is just so beautiful....the poetry can be visualized...great imagery and great lines Thank you for this and yes nature is what I always love in poetries 😊😊😊😊😊

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Vaibhav Simha 14 April 2017

Thank you so very much, I'm happy that I made at least one this world. Your encouragement is enough for me to write new poems. Here's a small gratitude poem for you: O' let I do whatever I want, I promise to make you happy. Or let I do whatever you ask, I shall do it no matter what! Your encouragement is shall persuade me, To accomplish in life, and far beyond thee. In the end, let us, the people, join hands together And promote world peace, forever and forever.

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Vaibhav Simha 14 April 2017

Thank you, all I need is a little encouragement, and you had given it to me. I promise to write poems just for your gracious smile.

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