Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

After the storm has past I see you in the sky
Reaching out from heaven releasing out your cry
The world has seen its sadness hate rage and fear
But peace joy and love is how we know your here
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JennyLynn Lavoie
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Stefanie Fontker 17 September 2011

I like your rhyming scheme, to me, it does not seem forced, and that is very rare. Interesting poetry, hopefully, you will continue to write more beautiful works like this.

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JennyLynn Lavoie

windsor, ontario
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