....Rainbow.... Comments

a 10+++ for you.. for this very melodious write... and unique thoughts...different colors... very inspiring.. lovelots, maia

inner field of my bosom, such a melody! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

What a find and how did I miss this one - it is a melody of colour, imagery and lovely words..... an inspired write..... it has to be one of your best....10 + ++ Fay

Beautifully written with nice imagery. Love.

you always penned with nice rhyme scheme Juniel..fabulous poem......10

Abounding in colors write.......brilliant verses....

Your combination of love and nature express your passion for the art.

Ah, a colt let loose in the art of love! Without assumptions, from the three persons photographed (given in your bio) which one is you? Second, ah..to be young AND in love..! Yes, pursue your dreams AND become better than the best ..(of poets) ! ! Cheers. Subroto

A lovely nature poem.

'Rose- WestLife Some say love it is a river that drowns the tender reed Some say love it is a razor that leaves your soul to bleed Some say love it is a hunger an endless aching need I say love it is a flower and you it's only seed It's the heart afraid of breaking that never learns to dance It's the dream afraid of waking that never takes the chance It's the one who won't be taken who cannot seem to give and the soul afraid of dying that never learns to live' hey well expressd...nature is something you always love..fills you with feelings of love..10++

The poem looks like another rainbow in the form artistic words.

sweet words of love more vibrant than the colours of the rainbow -10 anjali

Beautifully written with many hues of the imagination that carries the reader throughout the journey with you.......

Sounds to me like someone has fallen deeply in love, Juneil, and one doesn't have to be a genius to figure out that someone is you! This is a beautifully written and expressed poem, filled with luxuriant imagery in every verse, and it is that plush imagery which strongly suggests the writer of this fine poem is indeed in love with a beautiful young woman. Let us hope you two will be very happy together! Carl.

Vey lovely! ! ! The colours of the rainbow mean many things to different people.your poem is very joyful.A ten. Have you read my RAINBOW IN MOTION HAIKU? We had a double rainbow on Easter so I added five more haiku to the collection.

Reads like a rainbow, great imagery and cleverly written. Cindy

Its A Work Of ART! i love every single detail and every single description. you were able to enter my senses and made me feel the place this poem talks about. its all about imagination.

You have outdone yourself with this piece Juneil. I can see that you have put tremendous thought, care and love into its composition. I admire the couplet rhyme at the end to snap the concept and deliciously adorned work into place. Sherlyn is indeed blessed to have you write this and I do hope you can have it done in calligraphy and framed. Top marks Karin Anderson

wow! Juneil can i be one of the colors so vividly written in your poem beautiful 10

Great Job! Your words were well thought out.