Dawn
smiling through
the drizzle.
West flashes
a smile too,
reflective.
Thank You, poets, M. Asim Nehal and Rose Marie Juan-Austin, for the most encouraging remarks/evaluation of the poem.
Infectious like a rainbow. Every word truly weigh the colours of rainbow. Dawn, Smiling, Drizzle, Flashes, Smile, Reflective...Sublime
A beautiful depiction of the rainbow. Well expressed and succinctly presented.
Rainbow is a smile of the innocent heart of the skies, reflective of the gay abandon and the riot of colours of the dawn and the dusk….
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Smiling through the drizzle….