Thursday, November 15, 2007

Rainbow Comments

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I live at one of those Grey Clouds
Not really know that I am lifeless

I heard people talking about rainbow,
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Niken Kusuma Wardani
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Khairul Ahsan 02 April 2016

I love your thoughts reflected in this poem. Rainbow is a joy to see, but it is transitory. I loved these lines too: 'My heart reflecting the color of rainbow Blue for the peace soul Green for the new beginning Red for the faith Yellow for a bright hope'

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While the thunder sent me here Back to the Grey Clouds...... ya beautiful incarnation of nature..lovely creation and lliked by alll. i love it....10 read mine'Colour' and o, mother with papa series(Papa do u know and papa you too/ u will love it.

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Manonton Dalan 04 October 2008

beautiful poem thank you

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 August 2008

whatever the colors of your rainbow, don't let anyone ruins the colors coz that colors would paint your desires within.nice writes Kusuma.........what a name too!

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 22 August 2008

nice! keep writing! I like the words, I am belongs to the Grey Clouds. could you read my poems too? thank you.

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