Tuesday, December 15, 2015

Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw a small girl crying for the toy,
a drop of her tears making a rainbow around.
I saw a farmer working in the field
when he sweats I see rainbow around him.
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 20 December 2015

AWESOME.................10++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2015

Rainbow of many colours. Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 15 December 2015

Color is brought to life by all intense experiences. I agree. Thanks

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T Rajan Evol 15 December 2015

Very touchy and interesting poem.........10

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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