Thursday, July 7, 2016

Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

where a rainbow starts or ends
nobody really knows
it's born in mist and emptiness
out where a cold wind blows
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 08 July 2016

A splendid write. How you have captured the essence of rainbow is remarkable. I have been trying to write on a rainbow for some time but couldn't. Every verse of this poem is classy. A perfect 10.

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Barry Middleton 08 July 2016

Thank you so much Nosheen. I rather like this one too. Thanks for the 10.

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