Rainbow Comments

Rubel, I like your imagery and idea, but the poem is hard to follow, you need more cohesion, it doesn't all make sense. Your first stanza makes sense and I understand it. The rest of it is confusing, I try to take it a few words at a time, but some thoughts seem disconnected. I know you as a diamond eye of Terri, ocean dream comes in mind all problem are Kerry. What does this mean? Maybe a rewrite, I think it could be a great poem with a little work. Thank you for sharing, I look forward to reading this one again. When you are through let me know okay. RoseAnn