Seven colors of rainbow
Looks like a embow
Embow without a vow
But hearts says wow
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Very inventive format, Kranthi.......................................
It is quite possible, Kranthi, that this is the one thousandth poem I have read about a rainbow. The number could be even higher, for I know I have read over 50,000 poems so far in my lifetime. This one, however, is one of the more unique of such poems. It is quite exressive and gets it point across very well. Carl.
Nice rhyme after rhyme from rainbow to make life console.
I felt it rhyme so much it took out the meanin of your poem...But good rhymin
I do liek the rhymes and poem.. good going.
Sort of a sing song play on words - Though the rainbow is GODS covenant with us that he will not flood the world again. [ good vibe ]
dear........... poem is good...............but add images........poem is not about rhyming alone......still i give 10+++.................for nice rhymes.....
wonderfly writen! ! ! ! ! ! ! i tryed to write a poem like that where every line starts with the last word of the last line, there hard so good for you