Friday, September 29, 2017

Rainbird Comments

Rating: 5.0

A small bird flew from peepal branch
to the red leaf tree branch,
when very big rain drops fell in full view,
nay, they were couple,
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Upendra Majhi
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Anil Kumar Panda 29 September 2017

A beautiful poem with a very strong message at the end. Simple and beautiful. Liked it. 'For life was not to fly away from rain it was not sitting still even for a second, sat facing east, facing west, north, south, it was a marvel of nature.' is really very nice. Thanks for posting.

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Sabita Sahoo 29 September 2017

For life was not to fly away from rain it was not sitting still even for a second, sat facing east, facing west, north, south, it was a marvel of nature. Beautiful and sensible poem, thanks poet for sharing it. 10++

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