Rain When You Drenched Me Comments
Rain, when you drenched me with your cold wet drops
I felt so alone and forlorn
On slick pavements it fell
Alone, along, for long.
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You make beautiful music with this one. The refrain adds an exquisite touch. Love, Sandra
The melancholy feel of this poem is beautifully expressed. The alliteration works really well, and the last line on each stanza actually feels like rain beating down to me. Great work! Karin Anderson
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8/3/2025 9:13:09 PM # 1.0.0
The rain has that quality, n'est pas? Sometimes it is nice to walk in the rain, sometimes it matches our mood. You have caught that 'rainy days and mondays' mood very well indeed.