..................Rain Washing The World Green
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I have a homing bird feeling about
the rain falling
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Not just a poem but a wonderful poem. I liked the way the poetess has put spotlight on significant effect, influence and impact of rain on joyful life of people in general and the poetess in particular.
Once again Beyond words or umbers could say! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++ May your heart and family always remain safe! .. May God bless so dear! ..
Safely tucked under my parents wings, heart free to explore and play and snuggling in when the reigns of thunder come rumbling through and feeling the love that surrounds you! ..
to hear it has touched a heart is a tremendous reward==this poem is dear to me because I see my Mom and Dad again in it
Absolutely precious dear Susan! .. And I can't Thank you enough for sharing! ........
I just love this one, the heart, the feelings and the thoughts put into this! .. Sets me to dreaming sweet memories! ... Again
The first five lines of your third stanza impressed me a lot. Moreover, wonderful reminiscence of the memorable days of the past at family home amidst pattering of rain makes this poem endearing. Loved reading this beautiful poem.
THE NEW PH FORMAT IS DISASTROUS. I THINK CLICKING ON PoemHunter.com, above, will take you to a page to write a complaint. : (
I am so glad you like this piece so much you reread it. Mj! ! ! In dark and troubling times I often wish I could return to simpler times... Thank you, so very much for your kindnesses through the last few years- kindness is the way we will get through these Covid years!
I sometimes return to this great verse. Today I noticed it may express what we all want for the coming new year...a reset, a return to old, familiar days and ways. Perhaps 2020 will find its 'washing' in the very near future. A great and timely verse, Susan.
Mj=== I am so glad you like this piece so much you reread it! ! ! In dark and troubling times I often wish I could return to simpler times... Thank you, so very much for your kindnesses through the last few years- kindness is the way we will get through these Covid years!
Wow! ! ! ! Stuart! ! ! The greatest of compliments! ! ! ! Wow! ! ! ! Thank you! ! !
Stuart! ! ! The greatest of compliments! ! ! ! Wow! ! ! ! Thank you! ! !
You know how to write a comment, that is for sure! ! ! Thank you, thank you, thank you- -I think to have a poem reach out and touch the heart of another is the finest thing about writing! ! ! Put a smile on my face to read your words, Mr. Quoth! ! ! !
Yes! ! ! ! Cowboy, I agree! Maybe we find comfort in repetition because as children we kept our Mothers by our sides longer by asking them to read a story to us over and over again!
There is something very pleasing and soothing in the gentle repetitions of this poem. I like this a lot! Will read more or yours.
Cowboy, I agree! Maybe we find comfort in repetition because as children we kept our Mothers by our sides longer by asking them to read a story to us over and over again!
Susan, Very heart felt message that left me warmer. " raising my Que Sera Sera song to the falling rain washing the world green around me." ~~~ " I lived safely tucked under my parents' wings listening to the reign of thunder rumbling in the hills" . Moments to remember, poetry at its finest. QtR
Thank you, thank you, thank you- -I think to have a poem reach out and touch the heart of another is the finest thing about writing! ! ! Put a smile on my face to read your words, Mr. Quoth! ! ! !
Vivid poem bringing forth a cascade of memories from the past back to the present. Well done Susan!
Beautiful, absolutely wonderful.
Thank you, Smoky Hoss... I am grateful that you could navigate to my wall--I have problems navigating this site these days--seems to be unplugged a lot!