Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Rain Upon A Window's Glass Comments

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Haunted by the thought of sleep
I refuse to lay my head to the pillow.
Instead I leave a dull lamplight on,
Its blunt birth of light bursts pathetic lurches of illumination
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Ena Wojcik 16 April 2009

hmm. you managed to put some rage into something people normally think of as calm and peaceful, yet, your poem continued soft and gently like the raindrops. i guess there's another side of rain i never knew! i like it, good work.

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Graham Stone

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