Wednesday, December 28, 2011

Rain Tear Comments

Rating: 5.0

A tear of rain; people show you feign,
A tear so much extraviour and in pain,

You left the heavens in sole purpose,
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Dandy leo jr.
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Vipins Puthooran 31 December 2011

It's a great poem! ! I like the rhyme-pattern! ! Poignant write! ! Tears always show the hurt of heart/ Top marks! !

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Rekha Mandagere 31 December 2011

The poem is beautiful and rhythmic.I enjoyed reading this work. Rekhamandagere

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