Tuesday, July 14, 2009

# Rain (Tanka) # Comments

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The earth is arid,

The high sun rapes its green land,
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Indira Renganathan 12 August 2009

The high sun rapes its green land, Fury breaks the soil....aridity very well described....good write.....10++

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Ency Bearis 14 July 2009

to its true...great verses to ponder......10

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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